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Thursday, November 24, 2011

Chapter 2

This part isn't really as exciting but my friend couldn't wait for more.  Don't be afraid to give me more tips!  Oh, also, please tell me if I have any grammar and spelling answers.

Chapter 2
    “That was high-larious!” exclaimed Jake Vin as he walked out of the theater with a bag of popcorn.
    “Dude, we need to plan these movies more often,” said the most charming Ethan.
    I watched as they chatted away.  The way Ethan casually twitches his head to get his dark, chocolate hair out of his sea green eyes.....  Sigh.
    “You’re drooling.”
    I jumped like a high jumper, “Geez Adrianna!  Scare me why don’t ya?” I scrubbed my cheek.
    “I was kidding,” giggled Adria.  She’s always doing that to me.  I still think she’s a great friend.  I love her red hair with curls that bounce back when you pull them down.  Her pointers are even better when it comes to basketball.  Even with them, I know I’ll never be as great as her.  She’s so tall and makes almost every shot.
    “To bad Sue couldn't come but at least you and Bailey could,” Sue is Susan's kinda, sorta nickname like Adria is short for Adrianna.  Sue is one of those smart bookworms like me.  She has electrically, brilliant blue eyes that used to be covered with brown glasses until she got contacts.  Sue is rather quiet and hates to get into trouble.  Nobody really hates her but we are kind of her only friends.
    “Did you know that it’s healthy for you to laugh at least ten to fifteen minuets everyday?”  Bailey commented coming to stand next to us.
    “Um, usually Sue tells us that type of stuff,” Adria said astounded.  Bailey isn't really what you call “the sharpest knife in the drawer” if you know what I mean.
    “Well, I just texted her that the movie had me laughing so hard, I almost peed my pants.  She told me that it’s healthy for you to laugh at least ten to fifteen minutes each day.  She said it gets your heart rate up and if you injure yourself, not big injuries though, it makes it so it doesn't hurt as much.  I guess we all are pretty healthy,” then she giggled that broke into laughter which was contagious so of course we all started to just crack up, nearly falling on the ground laughing.
    Sammy walked out and stared at us and said, “Are you guys high or what?  Wow!  All you guys are dorks.”  Then she couldn't help it and joined us.
    “What’s so funny?”  I look up through damp eyes and tried not to laugh at Jake and Ethan’s clueless expression but it was so comical that it just sent a hurricane of laughter through my body.
    “Um, Maya, can you breath?” Ethan gave me that great crooked grin that made him look so suave, cute, and... Sigh!
    “Yea... I can’t... My sides... Hurt... Maybe... I can’t... Hahahahahaha!” Well, I tried didn’t I?
    “Well, text me when you can talk or at least stand,” he chuckled as he swagged away with Jake.
    About ten more minutes later, all of us walked to my house still giggling and a bit punch drunk.